Feedback on some dialogue in my story?

jpost2129 Asked: Feedback on some dialogue in my story?This is a conversation between my MC and his best friend/ possible love interest. He gets screwed over by the girl he likes for the 3rd time..to be vague. I guess I just want to know if it's realistic and everything? Thanks!So what happened, Colt? You look pissed. She had a cute way of pointing out the obvious. Yeah no **** I look pissed. My god damn pictures gonna be plastered everywhere. She looked like a scared little kid. I was yelling. SorryIts fine, you didnt mean it. I know how you get sometimes. She looked at her shoes. No, I

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